Yuuki Akagi {Finished}

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Yuuki Akagi {Finished}

Post by skeletalAssociate on Sun Aug 02, 2015 10:35 pm



Name: Yuuki Akagi {Arachne}

Age: 18

Gender: Male, but is often mistaken as female.

Love Interest: Not yet. :'C

Organization: Unaffiliated

Kagune: His Kagune start at the middle of his back, splitting off into 4 sturdy but thin spider-like legs. In combat he will use them like spears, thrusting them at his enemy. If he notices that this battle is not in his favor, he will use these legs to scale vertical surfaces. Each leg, straightened fully, is about 10ft long. They are black on the top, and fade to red on their inside. [Rinkaku]

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Stealth

Physical Description: He's a tall but lean guy, standing about 6'1" and weighing 145 pounds. He has long blonde hair and for some strange reason, people always seem to mistake him as a girl. He wears a black and grey sweatshirt with a dark grey scorpion embroidered below his left collarbone. Underneath he wears a black and white striped t-shirt. He wears jeans that are somehow too long for him while fitting like normal jeans otherwise. His eyes are a light teal and he can't grow facial hair. His Mask is a humanoid spider face, though he tends to forget to use it most of the time. That just about covers it I think.


Personality: At most times he has a laid back attitude to him, and enjoys other ghouls and even human's company. But, if hungry, will kill remorselessly despite if they were friends or not. He of course, being a chill dude, will apologize to them honestly after or while he is killing them. He also doesn't really care about high end flesh or any of that crap, but will enjoy it if he gets some. Looting and discarding the bodies is now second nature to him, often prying open sewage grates and dumping the remains inside. Maybe some lucky ghoul will stumble across it elsewhere and have a meal just waiting for them. Changing his personality around different groups, He will act humble as all hell around new people/authority, Around his enemies he will be snide and sarcastic, When he's with his friends though he will go to his lazy/slacker attitude.

History: Parents left him in the alleyway in which he currently resides, probably to continue their sadistic sexcapades without having to worry about a child. He survived by making an alert system out of string and tin cans to let him know when prey was near. He had already learned to read at this time and is fairly literate.

Residence: 7th Ward, on any old fire escape in a dark alleyway

Other: speaks in #009999, found a cell phone off of one of his prey, uses it for news/weather/internet. He hates his nickname, as arachne is female.


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Re: Yuuki Akagi {Finished}

Post by Live To Serve on Sat Aug 08, 2015 4:28 pm

I love how well done your spider Motif is, but would like more in the way of personality as you only mention hunting habits. Furthermore, You should reduce your number of Kagune to 4 or lower, as having more than 4 in the Tokyo Ghoul universe is usually only possible for those on the path to becoming a Kakuja, which requires a lot more leveling.

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Re: Yuuki Akagi {Finished}

Post by skeletalAssociate on Sat Aug 08, 2015 7:49 pm

Thank you for helping! I hope this fixes it a bit!
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Re: Yuuki Akagi {Finished}

Post by Live To Serve on Sat Aug 08, 2015 8:45 pm

Excellent, let's move this to the approved section then! Great character btw.

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