Miko Cross - Finished

Name: Miko Cross “TheHook”

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Love Interest: None at this time

Organization: Unaffiliated

Kagune: He has a purple Rinkaku type kagune but usually uses only two of the tentacles in a fight unless he feels the need for more strength and defense rather than speed. His fighting style is generally dodging attacks while figuring out weak spots and ways he can exploit them along with taking note on how he can use the environment to his advantage, if he finds himself in a fight which he cannot work out anything without getting himself killed first, he will start to get brutal usually by continuously attacking the enemy anywhere with his attack speed rising at an alarming rate however this will backfire by exhausting the living hell out of him. There is a phrase that he lives by and describes him in a fight “A cornered Fox is more dangerous than a Jackal.”

Primary Stats: Speed, Attack and Stamina

Physical Description: Has dark brown hair almost mistaken for black with the fringe reaching halfway down his cheeks which is generally covering his left eye, has bright blue eyes, near pale skin, a skinny yet strong build, he is 5'8, weighs 58kg and wears worn dark blue baggy jeans, black and white sneakers, a black worn hoodie, and a dark grey tank top underneath.

Personality: He is very quiet and keeps to himself but part of him wants to interact with people (ghouls and humans alike) however cannot bring himself to risk losing anyone he gets close to. He is somewhat easy to manipulate but if he feels something isn't right he will start questioning whats happening around him. He doesn't like to harm humans in any way in fact he quite likes them however he understands that when he must eat he must eat. He has a rather big soft spot for children and rarely lashes out even when you strike a nerve, other than that he is almost emotionless unless something done or said has hit home.

History: Miko was born and raised in the 14th Ward, never knew his parents and was raised by a violent gang which made Miko progressively more and more violent from the innocent kind child he was. He had a signature way of killing people which was to beat them to exhaustion, pin them on their stomach with two tentacles of his kagune and use a third as a hook placing it in his victims mouth then ripping the top half of their head off thus giving him the nickname “TheHook”.

When Miko was 17 years old he and a few fellow ghouls chased down a family of 3 ghouls, a mother, and two kids. Miko and his friends killed the father as he was defending them earlier, as Miko watched his friends drag the family appart from eachother and the mother try to defend herself and her children, he asked himself “so family dies to protect one another?” then made him wonder if this is how he ended up alone. Before the mother was killed Miko realized he couldnt let what happened to him happen to those kids, so he stepped in killing his old friends then sent the family on their way apologising for the dead father. Miko escaped to the 20th Ward after the gang figured out what he had done, there he settled in an abandoned appartment and did what he could to get by while looking human which included eventually getting a job. A few months later he met a human named Taylor who was at the time 19 years old, they got along quite well and became best friends in no time however there was a catch.

Taylor didnt know Miko was a ghoul and Miko couldnt let him find out... however Taylor was already in his 2nd year of CCG training and Miko didnt know this either. After a couple of years had past Miko found himself being tracked by his old gang and was closing in fast to the point where he had already been ambushed on the street a couple of times. One night Miko and Taylor were going to see one of their favourite movies on a rainy night just after Taylor finished work not giving him time to go home and get changed or leave his breifcase somewhere, Miko was suspicious but figured it was an ordinary briefcase and assumed the coat was just for the rain.

After the movie Miko identified a group of people as his old gang, Taylor noticed the group of shady looking people following them and led them and Miko to one of the sewers to hide however they walked right into the gangs hands. Taylor let out his quinque to protect them surprising the hell out of Miko but figured if Taylor can let out a secret like that then why shouldnt he, Taylor was surprised with the fact Miko was a ghoul but was glad to know he was on his side. After killing every last ghoul they were both pretty beaten but could easily walk it off, they both realised that if they stayed in contact of eachother it could be dangerous for them in which they decided to part ways for each others safety. Miko figured if he returned to the 14th he sure as hell wouldn't see Taylor again as planned and since the gang is either all or mostly dead it would be a little more safer for him.

Residence: 14th Ward

Other: Miko doesnt nececcarly have a fancy mask like most Tokyo Ghoul characters but his hoodie covers most of his face and has a black balaclava with the top cut off hidden underneith so he can pull up to bellow his eyes if need be.

The character itself looks good, but consider the history; the whole "I loved you all along" thing , followed by his revenge story is very cliche. I will approve this if you wish, but I strongly recommend creating a more solid background, which would make this character all the more believable and likable. Speaking from experience as a writer.

I had a feeling the history was a bit cheesy if it is though ill change it up thanks for the heads up XD